for a score of 3.5 or higher follow these helpers:
1. start with an attention grabber
ex: It was very hot. (Booooring!)
It was positively sweltering. (That's more like it!)
2. use transition words
ex:Clearly, As you can see, Obviously, Indeed, Truly,
3.inroduce a new paragraph with these
ex:To begin with, In addition, Furthermore, Equally important,
4. eliminate the use of weak elements
ex:Hi, my name is,I think,My first reason is, Thank you for reading my essay
Refrence:
http://www.kimmelskorner.com/fcat_writing_advice.htm:http://old.escambia.k12.fl.us/schscnts/mpark/parentresources/urlsforparents.htmlhttp://teachers.dadeschools.net/jenriquez/psms/documents/101FCATTIPS101FCATTIPS.pdfhttp://www.docstoc.com/docs/3668312/FCAT-WRITING-TIPS